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Post by Snowball on Mar 18, 2011 12:54:59 GMT -5
Affalo and Pinky swim one handed to try and help Cinder by untiring the ropes while Trent helps Kyie out of the ropes. Pinky and Affalo get to Cinder and unties the rope around her hands letting them free then Affalo swims to the top with Cinder after Pinky has sorted his other hand out, meanwhile Trent undoes Kyie's hands and Kyie undoes Trent's hands Pinky swims to Trent and Kyie, Trent undoes Pinky's hands and they all swim to the top climbing out of the water they all help Cinder and Affalo up, *Coughs*"Everyone alright?" Pinky asks while choking on the water, "Yeah how about you?" Kyie asks choking aswell, Trent and Affalo try to wake up Cinder "Cinder wake up please?" Affalo asks wet and coughing. "Come on Cinder wake up come on for Affalo!" Trent says trying to wake her up, meanwhile Trent and Affalo's dad is having fun eating then goes to check on the kids, Pinky here's some one coming, "Quick hide someone is coming!" Pinky says helping Kyie and Trent up and Affalo picks Cinder up and they all hide, then there dad walks in seeing none of them in the water and a window opened, "Quickly find them now!" He orders the men in the black sweaters.
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Post by cinderpaw on Mar 19, 2011 8:47:58 GMT -5
Pinky, Affalo,Trent, Kiye and Cinderpaw in Affalos arms runs fast into the forest. Meanwhile their dad has sent out 10 of his strongest guards after them to kill them. " I want you to find them! and you have my permission to kill them.. all of them!! the man in the white coat says to 10 more of his guards and steps into his office while the 20 guards set out travling through the forest looking for the kids. Meanwhile, All the kids are running and they find a little house that was abandoned a while ago. Cinderpaw's body starts to feel really cold because she is wet and frozen then she starts coughing out alot of water then all of the sudden for no reason she turns into her cat form because she cant control her body now and she faints again, in her cat form.
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Post by Snowball on Mar 20, 2011 9:58:52 GMT -5
Affalo sets Cinder on the chair that is in the old abandoned house and sits near her while Pinky and Trent go to get some fire wood and Kyie tries to find something to sort there wounds out. "Do you think that Cinder is going to be okay Trent?" Pinky asks finding the wood, "I don't really know but she needs to hang in or Affalo will go off on one and probably kill his and mine's dad." Trent replied picking up the wood and walking back to the house with Pinky, meanwhile Kyie finds some old bandages and wipes then walks back to Affalo with them, "Will these help?" He asked handing them to Affalo, "Yes thank you Kyie." Affalo says taking them and helping out looking at Cinder.
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Post by cinderpaw on Mar 21, 2011 14:18:01 GMT -5
Cinderpaw changes back into her cat form, her wounds have gotten worse she trys as hard as she can with all her might to keep alive.. meanwhile the guards that Affalo's and Trent's dad sent out are running in the forest trying to find the kids. The guards all stop when they see a trail of blood turning in the direction near abandoned house. " Do you think this is from the kids?" asks one of the guards. " I don't know, why dont you check with the machine that the boss gave us.." says another guard. " Oh yeah! " says the first guard, then he pulls out a small machine and checks the blood.. then it shows a picture of Cinderpaw on the screen. " Isnt that the girl the boss wanted?" asks another guard. " Yes! they went that way! " yells the first guard pointing out in the direction of the house.. then all the guards set off running closer and closer to the kids..
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Post by Snowball on Mar 22, 2011 14:06:29 GMT -5
Affalo helps Cinder with a little help from Kyie, meanwhile Pinky and Trent gather the fire wood and walk back to the house. Pinky hears a little noise and stops, "What was that, Trent did you hear that noise?" Pinky asked curiously, "It's probably just a howl of a wolf or just the wind don't worry about it Pinky." Trent replies stopping and staring at Pinky. "Okay lets get back before anything happens Trent." Pinky says walking to Trent and then onwards to the abandon house where Affalo, Cinder and Kyie is.
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Post by cinderpaw on Apr 1, 2011 11:58:58 GMT -5
The guards are getting closer and closer to the abandoned house. BEEP BEEP " huh! " the guard looks down at his watch and suddenly the man in the white coat appears " Did you kill them yet?!" he yells. Guard 1: n-not yet b-boss but we w-will we got that g-girls blood trail.." " Well Hurry up! before someone finds out about this! " he yells. " Y-Yes b-boss.." says Guard 1 then the man in the white coat dissapears. Meanwhile<< Cinderpaw slowly starts to wake up " A-Affalo..? P-Pinky..?." she says with a weak quiet voise.
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Post by Yuuki-Snowball on Apr 1, 2011 12:55:31 GMT -5
(It's me Snowball I just can't get into that account anymore so I have to use this one okay.)
Pinky runs through the back door into the house to Cinder with Trent seeing that she is awake. "Cinder are you okay?" Affalo asked immediately, "I'm sure she is fine Affalo" Pinky and Trent said together, meanwhile Kyie is in the kitchen making some food when he hears the beeping sound, "Guys I think we were being followed?" Kyie asked a bit scared. "Are you sure Kyie because if we are we need to get moving now?" Trent asks standing up and looking at Kyie urgently. "Yes I heard and noise coming from outside and a couple of voices and it sounded like the man from the castle and his guards." Kyie answered bravely explaining what he heard. "Okay then. Let's get moving." Trent said helping everyone up and Affalo putting Cinder on his back as they all walked out of the back door down to the secret tunnel out of the house underground as Trent shuts the trap door the men walk in not seeing any blood on the ground except a puddle near the chair where Cinder was laying down.
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Post by cinderpaw on Apr 10, 2011 8:58:05 GMT -5
Cinderpaw looks up weakly from affalos back then her head falls back down onto his shoulder. " I-I.. c-can't make i-it can i-i..? " says Cinderpaw very weakly. She then goes limp again and transforms back into a grey cat, she plunges off of Affalo's back and lands in the dust on the ground behind him sending up dropplets of blood through the air. She starts breathing loudly and choking. Meanwhile<<-- The men break down the door and run into the house and they look around seeing the food kiye was making and the chair with blood everywere. " They were here.. " say Guard 1. They look around and see the door to the secret tunnel. " Hey look down there! " yells guard 5. They get closer to the door and open it..
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Post by Yuuki-Snowball on Apr 11, 2011 16:50:33 GMT -5
Affalo looked back and sees Cinder lying on the floor, he runs back to her picking up the little grey cat and catches up with the others, "Your going to make it out of her Cinder don't worry." Affalo said running towards the back entrance. Pinky and Trent see Affalo while Kyie sniffs out a safe way back to Thunderclan city, "Guys this way." Kyie said as her ran towards a little woodland with the others following behind him. "Are you sure you know where you are going Kyie?", Pinky asked him worried and following, "You can always trust my nose Pinky don't worry we are heading straight to Thunderclan City." Kyie said as he ran through the beautiful green woodland seeing cute deer's and lovely flowers as they ran, then he stops as he came to a huge Iron gate that said 'Thunderclan City' on. "Here we are, told you Pinky, you can always trust my nose." He said proud of himself.
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Post by cinderpaw on May 29, 2011 9:10:44 GMT -5
Cinder wakes up slowly. Her eyes still closed but shes still awake. ( Meanwhile ) The guards are running through the tunnel. Guard 1: " They went this way!." He said. " I am getting a signal, There really close..!" said another guard. They all run until they see the spot where Cinder fell. " Look! We're getting REALLY close now.. and if we have to put up a fight.. it won't be hard to win.." Said guard 1. They continue running, handcuffs and cages in hand. ( Meanwhile) Cinder opens her eyes. She feels nothing at all. Even though she is burned badly but has stopped bleeding. Her swaying back and fourth due to the running. She sees Affalo then she looks around. " W-Where am.. I-I.. " She said faintly. Her usual bright blue eyes now dull and pale, her gray cat ears droop back with out any strength to hold them up. She lets out a faint meow and looks over at Pinky. " P..Pinky.. There.. Coming.. "
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Post by Yuuki-Snowball on May 29, 2011 16:28:09 GMT -5
"Cinder, Your awake??" Trent said turning towards Cinder... "Cinder... A-are you okay?" Affalo asked happy but in a sad way. "We better get moving into ThunderClan citty an fast lets move." Pinky Said smiling as she lead the others to a whole new home in ThunderClan city.
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